Blog 3: Spilt Milk by Tim Miller

What did Tim Miller do that made this a good piece of writing?

His story was of himself as a homosexual 19 year old homeless person. He begins his story hitchhiking to California. When he gets there he gets sucked into a cult, but is able to get himself out. He then goes to meet his friends in California who take him to a beach. The exerpt ends with him meeting a new person and going to his house for dinner.
What, in my opinion, made this piece so fun to read was the use of imagery. When he is hitchiking, he describes each car that goes by until he gets picked up. When he gets sucked into the cult, he describes the dinner that they feed him. He says that everything is made from brocoli, but is was yellow and wilting. He also describes how cold the ocean water was at the beach.